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These below are my poems. Some rhyme; some don't. Some flow; others
are disjointed. But all are good examples of poetry in my (biased)
opinion. If you believe otherwise, though, PLEASE
tell me! I won't bite your head off if you
say you don't like it; I'll probably thank you if you tell me ways to
improve it. At the bottom of each page is a link to my Critique form.
Please fill this out for each poem, being as detailed with your
dislikes or likes as you can. You can be general, saying you liked it
or hated it, but I'd like some feedback. Thank you.
Phoenix Rising
My first try at an epic poem. I've got a ways to go, but here's my beginning so far.
If Only
This was just something I thought of about memories of mine
Oblivion
I just started writing, and this came out.
Pet Heaven
I wrote this just on a whim, but it helped my aunt, and myself, cope with the loss of pets.
Lord....
I was very bored, and it just came.
Forgotten, We
I was feeling particularly lonely and had just seen _Ever After_
Books
I like books; what else can I say?
Today
Don't ask! It was on a whim!
Something
I wrote this at the same time as Today and Whatever
Whatever
Another nonesense poem from a bored mind
For Hearts That Have Never Been Loved
I had just seen "Ever After" and "Zorro" and felt this. It twisted as it came out though.
Any comments? Ideas? Please email me with any critiques or comments you have about my works. I'd really appreciate it. I also have a form you may fill out if emailing is too much a hassle.